Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Qin's Worst Choice Yet


Kelly McCusker-Brown                     Editorial Article                      2-5-12
Qin’s Worst Choice Yet
          The Emperor of Qin decides to become a legalist. Qin says, “I want control over my dynasty so my officials and I decide we should have many edicts and harsh punishments for those who disobey.” Legalists believe that people are basically bad. This is not the smartest choice, Qin’s terrible decision on becoming a legalist will harm China.
          Instead of continuing Confucius teachings like the other dynasties Qin chose legalism. This means China will have less education for the common man. Now there will be many edicts and harsh punishments for those who do the littlest crimes. It is illegal to whine about Qin’s government. If you even suggest things might be improved you will be put to death without a trial. Lastly the philosophy of legalism might start a rebellion. This could be a big mistake for the Qin dynasty because people will not enjoy the harsh punishments and they will start going against Qin. Qin should have never gone with legalism.
          However, others think following the ways of legalism instead of Confucianism was the best choice. Others think Qin’s decision on legalism is necessary to unite China. Some people believe that legalism gives the people of China more discipline needed to work hard, but it might make them rebel. Others say legalism is a great way for Qin to have control over his dynasty, but who wants to live in a dynasty with such tight control? Lastly people might think there would be less education and more time for work sense Confucianism is banned. “Yes, people will spend less time studying Confucianism, but they will spend more time dealing with the harsh punishments of legalism.” However, these people are wrong because people who do the littlest things get harshly punished.
          China’s philosophy should be Confucianism not legalism. This will keep China together and the Qin dynasty would last much longer if we followed Confucius teachings. How will Qin’s decision affect China?     

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